My current stage in the writing process: a second round of full-book edits before we head into copy editing. While the first round was mostly about plot and Habo’s development, this round, most of my editor’s comments focus on the lacking depth of my secondary characters.
My first, very mature, reaction was to say “Well, yes, of course they’re shallow! They’re secondary characters, dammit. One of them leaves by page 10! You expect me to deepen him?”
However, once I had huffed and puffed a little, I realized the deep and abiding wisdom of my editor. No one you meet in real life sees themselves as a secondary character– everyone, no matter how boring, no matter how quickly they leave our story, is the main character of their own life. What I needed was to approach my story realizing that every character is not entering each scene asking themselves how they will interact with Habo. They’re too busy living their own priorities. To them, he is a secondary character.
So, here’s this week’s writing tip: give your secondary characters space to tell you about themselves. What I did? I hunted Google images, found faces that fit my vision of my characters, and then typed up a page or two, in first person, from each one of them where they talked about their life, hopes, and reactions to story events. Armed with these sheets, I’m wading in to my second revision, ready to let them be themselves.
Anyone else out there with any characterization tips? I’d love to hear them!